A Toxic Word

August 25th, 2023 was a day marked on the calendars of many writers, because it was the day the quarter-finalists were announced for the Final Draft/Big Break Screenwriting Contest. I was one of the many who were disappointed that their entry didn’t make the cut. It’s on days like that, when you’re discouraged, that you have to make an effort to avoid negative self-talk. One of the worst words you can use, is the highly toxic term, wannabee.

The term wannabee is dangerous for writers because it can be so discouraging, making us feel that only writers who have written bestsellers or have won awards are real writers and the rest of us are, well, just wannabees. And yet, we are writers, because we continue to craft stories, with no guarantee that our work will be published or if self-published that it will be popular.

If you have a private pilot’s license and you enjoy flying your single engine aircraft, you’re not a loser because you aren’t in the cockpit of an F-35 jet fighter. You just love to fly, and take to the skies every chance you get. Writers love to sit down at a keyboard, accepting the challenge of taking the images in their minds, and creating original stories that others can read and enjoy.

Any challenge worth pursuing involves risk. The fact you’re willing to accept risk by entering contests, submitting work for publication, or posting it in public, knowing it may be criticized, proves you aren’t a wannabee. How serious a writer you are, can’t really be measured by how much you write, because everyone’s schedules are different. Being discouraged doesn’t make you weak, because disappointment can be very difficult to overcome.

Consider how many chain stores you see in shopping malls. You could walk through a dozen shopping malls and barely seen any difference, other than the order in which the stores are arranged. And the food courts? You can probably guess the brands before you see them. If you’re actively writing, you aren’t a wannabee, you’re an artist accepting the responsibility of creating something unique every time you write a story.

The reason that you can write something original, is because you’re an original. Only one person out of over seven billion has your imagination, and that’s you! Take some time today to write, and show us what you can do.

Copyright © 2023 by J. Paul Cooper

The Essential Church: A Review

The Essential Church (2023), Written and Directed by Shannon Halliday, is a documentary about pastors, on both sides of the United States/Canadian border, who refused to comply with government restrictions during the Covid-19 crisis.

In California, Pastor John MacArthur, a man in his eighties, was threatened with fines and imprisonment. In Alberta, Canada, Pastor Tim Stephens and Pastor James Coates both spent time in prison. While they were behind bars, their congregations were meeting outside the churches, because they had been locked out of the buildings.

The documentary includes discussions with the pastors, their lawyers, and church elders, as well as television interviews and clips of police and health authorities. One clip records police arresting Pastor Tim Stephens at his house, in front of his wife and children. During the arrest, one of the police officers can be heard quoting scripture to Pastor Stephens. Would a police officer quote the Koran (Quran) to a Mullah?

Since I find history fascinating, I enjoyed how modern events were contrasted with events that took place hundreds of years ago in Scotland. When the Crown tried to dictate how they were to worship, some congregations rebelled and Christians lost their lives as a result. The stories of martyrdom use an animation technique with stone carvings in dark shadows. The unique animation adds a sense of gravitas to the narration.

During the Covid-19 crisis, the question many pastors had to grapple with, was whether government restrictions were forcing them to disobey the Lord Jesus Christ. The Essential Church is the story of three pastors who believed that was the case, and refused to back down.

Copyright © 2023 by J. Paul Cooper

Library Musings

I suspect that many of the people who follow my blog face the same dilemma that I do; you’d love to buy every book you read, but because you’re constantly reading, it’s just too expensive. Here are some suggestions to consider.

The next time you visit a bookstore, take note of the books you’d like to read. Check your local library’s website to see if they have copies; if not, you can suggest they order the book(s.) When I do buy books, it’s because I really want to read them, and I’m not prepared to wait for a library copy.

Depending on how long it is and how fast you read, the library’s lending period may not be long enough for you to finish reading a book. Since I’m a consistent reader, but not a fast reader, I put a hold on both print and eBook editions of longer books. I’ve finished several longer books starting with the eBook and finishing the last chapters with a print edition and visa versa.

Even if you find the subject fascinating, and you’re sure you’d like the content of an audiobook, don’t buy (or borrow) a copy until you’ve listened to a sample. I learned that lesson borrowing audiobooks from the library, only to discover that the voices of some narrators are extremely irritating. One of the reasons I don’t make videos for my website, is because I have a very nasal voice.

Although I believe it’s important to support local authors, I don’t buy a book unless I’m sure I’ll actually read it. I ease my conscience by suggesting the library buy a copy. When filling out the online form, I enter “Local Author” in the section concerning why the library should purchase a copy. Libraries are proud of the fact they support local authors, so you’re helping the library staff by bringing it to their attention.

If you’re a Blogger, the local library is an amazing resource; you can borrow a book or movie and then write a review at no cost. Don’t worry about when it was published or produced, because it’s more about helping your readers decide whether to read the book or watch the movie, then about the year it was released.

One of reasons I’m glad I self-published my last two eBooks through Draft2Digital, is because they are available through so many library distributors. If you’re curious about my eBooks, you can ask your library to buy copies, and all it will cost you is a few minutes filling out an online form.

Copyright © 2023 by J. Paul Cooper

P.S. I just noticed today that many legitimate comments have been moved to SPAM.

Book Review: Fractal Noise by Christopher Paolini

Fractal Noise by Christopher Paolini is an excellent science fiction novel. The hard cover is 286 pages long, so unlike his previous sci fi novel, To Sleep in a Sea of Stars, it was easy to read within my local library’s twenty-one day borrowing limit.

Fractal Noise is the story of a four person team sent to investigate a giant hole on the planet Talos VII. The anomaly sends out a pulse about every ten seconds, and as the team approaches the hole, it increases in intensity as tension grows among the team members.

Alex, the main character is tormented by the death of his partner, Layla. When she died, she left him with a video record of all her memories. Throughout the unfolding drama, he often looks back at them, knowing he pain it’s going to arouse, but unable to overcome the addiction

What makes Paolini’s novel compelling, is how he reminds us that we’re vulnerable, despite technical advancements. Sand turns self-propelled sleds into burdens to be dragged. And human nature doesn’t change, as the hatred between the team leader Talia and geologist Puskin intensifies.

The rock-like entities on the planet, which Alex refers to as “Turtles,” are a constant presence. Since surface scans didn’t show any military threat, the only weapon they have is a bolt-gun used to drive in tent pegs for their shelter, and the pegs just bounce off the “Turtles.”

As the story unfolds, the team moves across the surface of Talos VII, sustaining injuries, pulling their supply sleds, while constantly struggling against sand blown by gale-force winds. The never-ending “Thud” of the pulse grates on their nerves, prevents sleep, and exhausts their energy, growing stronger, the closer they get to the hole. The pulse interferes with communication, leaving the team without any outside help or guidance.

Great fiction makes you wonder what you would do if you were in the same situation as those in the story. And that’s exactly what Christopher Paolini does in Fractal Noise, by creating characters we can relate to. You feel their fear, desperation, and ultimately, hope.

Copyright © 2023 by J. Paul Cooper

Loyalty: The Heart of Drama

            It’s a classic pro-wrestling trope; one member of a tag-team is taking a beating, until with a sudden burst of energy, he manages to knock his opponent off his feet. Slowly, both wrestlers crawl towards their partners. Thousands of fans are on their feet, screaming as tensions mount, because everyone knows that whoever tags his partner first, will probably determine the outcome of the match. Having survived a vicious beating, refusing to give up, their hero finally reaches the corner.

            And then it happens…as he reaches up for the tag, his partner drops down from the side of the ring and walks away leaving him at the mercy of the other wrestler’s partner.  That’s what keeps fans taking out their credit cards to buy tickets for live events and watch then on pay-per-view: drama is fueled by loyalty.

            In Star Wars Episode III: Revenge of the Sith (2005) Anakin Skywalker is torn between his loyalty to the Jedi Knights and what they stand for, and his wife Padme, who he believes will become mortally ill. He is convinced by Supreme Chancellor Palpatine that the only way to save Padme is to pledge his allegiance to the Supreme Chancellor and learn the dark arts. The agonizing decision about where to place his loyalty is emotionally draining, both for the character on the screen and the audience sitting in theatres around the globe.

            Just as switching loyalties can create intense emotions, a character maintaining his or her loyalty can also pull at the heart strings, if there is a price to pay for that loyalty. As the story unfolds in Saving Private Ryan (1998) we learn that Tom Hank’s character is married and was a teacher before the war started.  We admire his dedication to duty and willingness to risk his life for his country, because he has so much to lose.   

            Drama is also created when a character finds that her loyalty was misplaced, and she feels that years of her life have been wasted. It might the end of a friendship, or the end of a marriage. Although it could involve personal relations, she might just as likely feel betrayed by a political party, a religious denomination, or a company. Perhaps she’s worked for the same corporation for a decade, even though she had other opportunities, and now she’s escorted out the front door by security guards during a round of lay offs. There she stands on the steps of an office tower, discarded by the company she trusted, with empty company slogans echoing in her mind.

            Since our lives revolve around loyalties, there are endless possibilities for the characters in your stories:  The married pastor of the church he attends, who he trusts for moral guidance, has been having an affair with the youth leader’s wife. Your character, who owns a small business discovers that her accountant has been stealing money from the company to pay gambling debts, and now the company is bankrupt. It’s discovered that the leader of the political party your character has been donating money to for decades, has been syphoning funds to offshore accounts.     

            Just as you ask what a character’s goals are, you can also ask where his loyalties lie. The higher the cost of loyalty, the greater the potential for drama.

Copyright © 2023 by J. Paul Cooper

Four Reasons To Enter Writing Contests

FOCUS Entering writing contests has many advantages, beginning with how it forces you to focus on a single goal. It’s easy to become distracted, moving from one writing project to the next, without actually finishing any of them. Making the decision to put all your efforts towards writing a great piece for a writing contest might be just what you need.

DEADLINES I find that writing without a deadline is extremely difficult. I allow myself to think I’ll get around to finishing a project sometime, because I don’t have a deadline, and end up in an endless cycle of procrastination. I recently entered a screenwriting competition, and the looming deadline was just enough motivation to finish writing the script.

REWARDS If you win a lottery, it’s great to have the cash, but you don’t really have a sense of accomplishment. Anyone can buy a lottery ticket. However, if you win a writing contest, you’ve demonstrated that you have significant talent and that’s something you can be proud of.

YOU WIN, EVEN IF YOU LOSE So, you focused on one project until it was finished, paid the entry fee and entered it in a writing contest. Even if you’re not competing with the general public (like a lottery ticket), your entry is still up against all the pieces submitted by other writers. What if you don’t win? You now have a new item prepared for the literary marketplace, and that puts you way ahead of someone who has a dozen unfinished projects.

Copyright © 2023 by J. Paul Cooper

Update: My story, “The Challenge” has been included in NEW SPACES, an anthology of science fiction short stories published by Lintusen Press, a collaborative micropress.

I Think I Have a Great Story Idea

I’ve lost count of the times I thought I had exceptional story ideas, but they didn’t produce the literary success I had anticipated. Does that mean I was wrong? How do you know whether a story idea is indeed, “great.”  

It seems obvious that J.K. Rowling had a fantastic story concept with the Harry Potter series, since each novel was an international bestseller, and they were all adapted as blockbuster movies. The first novel, Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone, however, was rejected by twelve publishers. If J.K. Rowling had given up after eleven rejections, would it have meant the story concept was flawed? No, but a manuscript with significant potential might have been lost forever.

What about originality? Can a story idea that has themes like those found in other books or movies, still be considered original? The television series Babylon 5 and Star Trek: Deep Space Nine were set on space stations, and for five years (1993-1998) both were on air at the same time. The movies White House Down, and Olympus Has Fallen were both about a terrorist attack on the White House and released in the same year, 2013. Can you imagine telling animation companies that they must stop producing movies with talking or singing animals, because it has already been done? A story idea must have some distinct elements, but writing a story that is absolutely unlike anything else that has been previously written, might be an impossibility.  

The reason so many stories can have similar themes yet retain aspects that set them apart from other stories, is because they flow from the minds of unique individuals. Two writers will not image the same characters or create identical worlds. The Hobbit by JRR Tolkien and the A Song of Fire and Ice series by George R R Martin both include dragons, and battle scenes, but you’d never get them confused.

Perhaps exceptional story concepts are distinguished by how many ways they are adapted. The novel, War Horse by Michael Morpurgo was adapted as a feature film The War Horse (2011) by Lee Hall and Richard Curtis. It is also a play, adapted from the novel by playwright Nick Stafford.

Although it’s not something you can anticipate while writing, the possibility exists that you won’t know you have a great story idea while working on a project. Writer Stieg Larson died in 2004, before his crime trilogy, beginning with The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo, became international bestsellers and were later adapted as feature films.

Unfortunately, there’s no guarantee publishing companies will accept your manuscript, even if it’s based on a great concept. Scarcity is a reality that affects all aspects of life, including literature and editors are forced to reject manuscripts with great potential, because budget constraints limit how many books they can publish.

The most important question, however, is whether you’re going to write. Your story idea might result in a bestselling novel, an Oscar winning screenplay, or a Tony (Antoinette Perry Award) winning play. It might be an eBook forgotten in an endless sea of thumbnails, or another screenplay that’s never produced. Is it worth it? Absolutely! What I’ve observed in other writers, and experienced myself, is there’s sense of accomplishment when you finish a writing project, and joy in the process as you let the creative juices flow.

I’m starting a new project. I don’t know whether publishers or producers will think my concept has potential or if they’ll just ignore it. Nevertheless, I will be writing, because I think I have a great story idea.   

Copyright © 2023 by J. Paul Cooper            

Book Review

Becoming A Writer-Staying A Writer by J. Michael Straczynski

Benbella Books 2021 230 Pages

If you just read about J. Michael Straczynksi’s success writing scripts for television series, as well as feature length screenplays, and comic books, that alone would be enough to convince you to buy Becoming A Writer-Staying a Writer. And it would be a good decision.

Having worked in Hollywood for decades, Straczynski offers a wide range of advice useful for both new and experienced writers. My favourite chapter was Annnnd Here’s The Pitch. If you hear the term “pitching” the first image that comes to mind might be a movie producer’s office in Hollywood. Straczynski, however, notes that an editor who is publishing your first novel, might want know about the second book you’re planning to write as well. This is useful knowledge, since many writers conferences include pitch sessions with agents and editors.

I appreciate Straczynski’s approach, as he discusses both the challenge involved in approaching agents, and practical steps you can take to develop a reputation as a solid writer. According to the author, having short stories published and offering to write a script for an independent filmmaker’s first short film can help in that process.

Straczynski’s book discusses technical aspects of writing, as well as emotional issues like Writer’s Block and Imposter Syndrome. Becoming A Writer-Staying A Writer is a perfect balance of straightforward advice and humour; Straczynski never denies that writing is a difficult process, but he reminds us why it’s important that we keep trying.

Copyright © 2023 by J. Paul Cooper

Do Your Characters Have Quirks?

It’s been many years since I’ve seen this character on television, yet I can still hear his voice when I’m walking through the dessert section of the grocery store, “COOKIES!” Why? There were no expensive CGI effects on Sesame Street. You remember the Cookie Monster, because no other character is quite like him, he’s one of a kind. You can see a reflection of yourself in the Cookie Monster, because he’s obsessed with cookies, and everyone is obsessed with something.

When Arnold Schwarzenegger says, “I’ll be back,” in The Terminator (1984) you’re anticipating his next move. It’s an action movie, so you know that someone’s going to get killed, or something is going to be blown up. If you’ve watched Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Askaban (2004), you remember Professor Snape saying, “Turn to page 394,” despite the fact he didn’t say it during an exciting scene. Allan Rickman developed a cadence for his character’s speech that was so unique, you can’t forget what he says.

Watching a B movie, the first thing you’ll notice, is there’s nothing about the characters that you can relate to, they’re just cardboard cutouts; constructed from layers of cliches. They don’t feel “real.” One science fiction movie I started to watch, began with a soldier who has gone rogue, he’s ignoring his commander’s orders to stand down. How many times have you seen that happen in a movie? A maniac has kidnapped a woman, and he’s acting exactly as you’d expect a maniac to behave, wild eyes, screaming, making threats, etc. What’s unusual, or memorable about these characters? Nothing.

As you’re writing, think about whether the movie that’s showing on the movie screen in your head is a B movie. Do your characters have any traits that will make them memorable? Consider Saving Private Ryan (1998); all the characters are wearing uniforms, so they aren’t distinguished by their clothing. but each one has a distinct personality that makes them feel like real individuals. And that’s what draws you in, it allows you to wonder what it would be like, to be in their situation. Likewise, if Captain Jean Luc Picard on Star Trek: The Next Generation (1987-1994) feels like a real person, then you can imagine what it might be like commanding a starship.

There are endless options when developing characters; age, gender, height, clothing, speech (cadence, accent, slang), occupation, food preferences, where they were born, where they’ve lived, there hopes and dreams, who they’ve loved, how they voted…. Throw in time travel and things get really interesting; he was born in 21st Century, but has been sent back to live in the 17th Century. If you’re writing science fiction, you’ll have to stretch your imagination to make an alien character stand out from other aliens!

The reason you can create unique characters, is because you are a unique human being with a unique imagination. You hear people say, there was only one Steve Jobs, or there was only one Jimmy Hendrix, and that’s true, but there is also, only one you. Keep writing!

Copyright © 2022 by J. Paul Cooper

Who Knows You’re A Writer?

Since you talk about it, your friends, family, and co-workers know that you’re a writer. If someone asked any of them, they’d say it’s your hobby. For many writers, however, it’s more than a hobby, it’s a passion, it’s who they are. So, how do you make the point that you’re serious about the craft of writing, and reach people that can help you develop a career?

Submit Your Work: This may seem like an obvious step to take, but it can be frightening, especially for beginning writers. You may have written a literary masterpiece, but no one will know will recognize your talent, unless they can read it. It’s possible to spend years on a novel, constantly making changes, and never submit it to a publisher, or self-publish it. It’s true that if you never make your writing public, no one can criticize it, but it also means no one can appreciate it.

Join A Writing Organization: Many writing organizations have member pages, where you can include a photo, a brief bio, items that you’ve had published (or self-published), and information about the types of writing you’re interested in. Recently, after someone saw my profile on a writing organization’s website, I was invited to be a guest author on a television show about writing. It will be aired later this fall on a community television station; so only few people will see it, but it does demonstrate how having a profile can be effective.

Look For Unusual Opportunities: Two of the most unique writing opportunities I’ve come across have involved coffee and beer. The first involved short stories being published on cardboard coffee cup sleeves, the ones they put on cups to protect your hands from the heat. The second one involved a brewing company, they were looking for short plays (54 words) to print on their beer cans. In both cases, the author’s name was included, so potentially thousands of people would see the names of the winning writers.

Start Blogging: If you’ve been reading blogs by writers, now’s the time to join us, and share your passion for, and knowledge of writing with everyone. You’ll never know what your potential is, or who will read your blogs, until you get started.

Note: I was profiled in the “A Day in the Life” section of the Calgary Guardian (www.calgaryguardian.com) on October 26th. I also finished writing a feature-length screenplay and entered it in a competition.

Copyright © 2022 by J. Paul Cooper